I have started to refine my essay, I have been using my research as a template to work from. The essay is far too long at the moment and needs to be refined, I also need to change the way it is written. At the moment a lot of the essay is written as if it is a blog post, lots of paragraphs starting with "I think" and lots of quotes that need to be trimmed down to specific sections that I want to refer to. I have been working through the template using my research blog posts as a reference and structure then reworking the wording and content as I go. I think I will need to refine the essay a number of times to make it flow, I have ordered the research in a way that I think best communicates my research and findings but want to make sure the information doesn't seem like separate chunks of information. during my research I have focussed in more and more onto fiction and really enjoyed the process so would like this to be evident in my essay. I am also going to conduct more visual research to see if it gives me more of an insight into my subject.
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